Order of specifics:  Sequence

Outline

Introductory paragraph

Thesis statement: In the Short Story, “the story of an hour” appears a typical nineteenth century wife. character Mrs. Mallard

Body

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GS Josephine told Mrs. Mallard about Mr. Brently’s death

SP   Mrs. Mallard’s reaction was not a typical wife’s reaction ;stunned by the shock

EX instead she started to cry violently in a storm of grief

SP she went alone to her room and sat on her armchair facing the window

EX from the window she could see tops of trees and people selling

SP she could smell rain she could hear people singing

EX she could feel the new beautiful spring

SP she started to weep again like a little child

EX she tries desperately to suppress her building emotions but she could not

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GS   Mrs. Mallard began repeating the word “free” over and over

SP it is this moment that her heart started beating quickly and her got very warm

EX she could see her new life as an independent woman

SP she could imagen the opportunities open to her

EX she will be free and no one to oppress her

SP  Mrs.Mallard knows that she will grief at her husband’s funeral

EX she loved Mr.Brently ,not often though

SP looking outside the window she saw the opportunities in life waiting for her

EX For the first time, she took a taste of independence and freedom

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GS After she first heard her sister Josephine asking her to open the door, she told her to go away

SP After Joesphine begged, Mrs. Marrla got up ,left the window and all opportunities behind her

EX she opened the door and cryed on her sisters arms

SP   they were both going down stairs when someone was opening the front door, astonishingly it was Brently

EX Richards tried to block him from the view of his wife, but it was too late SP Mrs. Mallard died from heart problems; from what doctors clam to be the joy that kills

EX what Mrs. Mallard experienced in her last moments was not joy at all

SP It was the loss of her dreams and opportunities in life that killed her

EX Her weak heart could not bear the way her dream of independence and freedom fade away

:Concluding paragraph

Concluding statement: Apparently, Mrs. Mallard’s heart trouble was not just a physical problem. On the contrary, she had problems with her marriage

The Story of an Hour

In the Short Story, “the story of an hour” appears a typical nineteenth century wife Mrs. Mallard. She is a young suppressed wife with heart problems. Her husband Brently died in an a train crash and she must be informed gently. Her sister Josephine and her husband’s friend .Richards was there too

                Josephine told Mrs. Mallard about Mr. Brently’s death as gently as possible. Mrs. Mallard’s reaction was not a typical wife’s reaction ;stunned by the shock. Instead, she started to cry violently in a “storm of grief”. Then she went alone to her room and sat on her armchair facing the window. From the window, she could see tops of trees and people selling. She could also smell rain and hear people singing. Mrs. Mallard could feel the start of a new beautiful spring. Yet, she started to weep again like a little child. Thereupon, she tried desperately to suppress her building 

emotions but she could not.

                  Mrs. Mallard began repeating the word “free” over and over. It is this moment that her heart started beating quickly and her body got warmer. Now, she could imagine her new life as an independent woman. Besides, she could imagine the opportunities open to her. Next she thought that she was free with no one to oppress her. Mrs.Mallard knows that she will grief at her husband’s funeral. She also knows that she loved Mr.Brently ,not often though. Soon she started to observe the window. She started looking outside the window and saw the opportunities in life waiting for her. For the first time, she took a taste of independence and freedom.

               

                 After she first heard her sister Josephine asking her to open the door, she told her to go away . When Joesphine begged, Mrs. Marrlad got up and left the window and all opportunities behind her. She opened the door and cried on her sisters arms. Both of them were going down stairs when someone was opening the front door.  Astonishingly , it was Brently. Richards tried to block him from the view of his wife, but it was too late. Mrs. Mallard died from a heart problem; from what doctors clam to be the joy that kills. But what Mrs. Mallard experienced in her last moments was not joy at all. On the contrary, It was the loss of her dreams and opportunities in life that killed her. Her weak heart indeed could not bear the way her dream of independence and 

.freedom fade away

                Apparently, Mrs. Mallard’s heart trouble was not just a physical problem. On the 

contrary, she had problems with her marriage. She was greatly moved by the death of her husband, .but her grief soon turned into excitement of her new situation